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1. The Most capturing moment to me, was probably when Brad described how the sound is like a baby crying. the main reason I thought this, because although i didn't hear that in the recording, i thought it was a good analysis of the sound.
2. Brad described his sound with excellent words, and interesting comparisons. He did a good and interesting job with Bringing his sound to life with the different descriptive words he used. i also liked listening to the sound while i read the description, because i really felt it added to the affect.
3. I think the only issue with brad's writing was it was a bit hard to follow the first time i read it, and i think the writing could have been brought even more to life if he had used more adjectives in his writing. I also think that if he added to the Section about how the audio could have been in a carnival ride, i think that would be a great addition to the writing.
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